JordanEmert

I thought it was a little bit Taylor Swift too though. My favorite line was "All that’s left are the tears on her guitar, And remains of love, tracked in ...

I liked this, until the ending. You wrote a page and then after Rodger had gotten there and everything after all the writing, he went home and didn't want to ...

wow. very good ending I might add. I liked the words you used in it. You described things very well and your words were big! I could never do something ...

I do not know why people are show harsh to other people here, come on cut people a break, gees! This is not why I critiqued you to talk about ...

Even though The prince never kissed Sleeping Beautyand woke her up like the original story goes, I thought this was a splendid ending. I honestly like this ending more, it ...