Jonny

Read this recently, and didn't like it. The story tries to build up the stoning to the highest point it will hold your interest. But the stoning is not innately ...

Sounds a lot like the Redwall books They were all the rage in my day (you can smell the sarcasm) I won't try to compete with the above poster It ...

Your style of writing is fine, though there really isn't anything special about it. More description is fine though. All that really turned me of was how generic it was. ...

For a short story, there has to be something really grabbing about it. I wasn't really grabbed here. Truthfully, I think culture has desensitized everyone to both werewolfs and vampires. ...

Very interesting. First of all, I wouldn't preface your writing with "this seems like a bad story". It doesn't set it of to a good tone, now does it? Plus ...

While I'm not sure I completely "get it", as an allegory, I do really like your style of writing. It has a really poetic quality to it. It conveys the ...