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Re: Silveleleon Chapter 1
"The next election is tomorrow." This should be "The next election was tomorrow." Don't get your tenses jumbled. "This place is filled" Once again, keep the tenses straight. "It was ...
Sat Jan 05, 2013 4:53 am -
Re: The Same Dream
Hm.
Fri Jan 04, 2013 7:38 pm -
Re: Rain's Destiny: Second set of chapters
Keep me posted. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Fri Jan 04, 2013 2:05 am -
Re: Seven Word Story
No problem. I enjoyed reading it!
Fri Jan 04, 2013 1:42 am -
Re: Chapter One: Scarlett
I reread your story and I can see the changes and additions that you have made. I definitely hear more of this girl's voice, which I love. But now, to ...
Thu Jan 03, 2013 9:46 pm