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Re: Silveleleon Chapter 1
"The next election is tomorrow." This should be "The next election was tomorrow." Don't get your tenses jumbled. "This place is filled" Once again, keep the tenses straight. "It was ...
Jan 5, 2013 -
Re: The Same Dream
Hm.
Jan 4, 2013 -
Re: Rain's Destiny: Second set of chapters
Keep me posted. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Jan 4, 2013 -
Re: Seven Word Story
No problem. I enjoyed reading it!
Jan 4, 2013 -
Re: Chapter One: Scarlett
I reread your story and I can see the changes and additions that you have made. I definitely hear more of this girl's voice, which I love. But now, to ...
Jan 3, 2013