JohnDaniel

A great story and a great way to remember the horror that 9/11 was. I like your approach of taking different people and outlining the impact the events of 9/11 ...

Amazing! The second and third chapters are even better than the first! There is a great build-up of tension and a lot of suspense. You write descriptive and the descriptions ...

This is really good! It is so engaging, I was immediately hooked! Your writing is so vivid and real, as reader I could picture everything effortlessly. You have done a ...

You have done a great job in making such a short story powerful and believable. I do agree with the above said, that it was a bit rushed and that ...

Wow, I was really very impressed with the first chapter of your story! First of all, the setting is great. As science-fiction, your world is original and at the same ...