Joelsweet

This poem is a certainly rambling piece. Which really works, I think, in this case. I got a feeling that this poem wasn't meant to be taken too seriously, from ...

The pacing was interesting, and while it worked in some places, it felt a bit rushed in others. (I don't know if that was the intention, however.) My other negative ...

A short poem, but very nice. I like the comparison between the bird and you, both eating breakfast on the weekend morning. It flows nicely, and makes sense in its ...

Thank you so much for the advice! ^^ I really appreciate it. The problem with me uploading this story all together is that it was divided into parts with illustrations ...

Thanks so much for the advice! ^^ I didn't think that anybody would read this, haha. I really appreciate your help. There's actually a lot more to this story, but ...