Joelsweet

Thank you so so much!!

Thank you, that's high praise!! And thank you about the dialogue, I've struggled with it in the past. I'm glad you noticed the helianthemum motif c:

Thank you so so much! I've been trying to improve my dialogue, so that's good to hear. Also, his name is hee-lee-an-th-ee-um

This is actually part one of a story ^^ I'll go into reasons more later. Glad you liked it!~

Thanks for the review! ^^ Evanesce: to pass out of sight, memory, or existence. I might write some more, but I don't know yet. I was thinking he could see ...

I've uploaded the other two parts ^^

Thanks for the review ^^

Thank you so much! ^^ I think I will write some more of this.

We're all weirdos, aren't we? c:

Thank you so much :) Your reviews are like stories unto themselves; they're so well written and full of information. You're very good at dissecting works. (Have you considered becoming ...

No, I agree with what you said. I like criticism, it helps me get better. Thanks, really. ^^ I'm always trying to improve, but because I have writer's blindness, I ...

Thanks for the review! ^^

Thank you so much! I'm glad you could give me some advice, I'm looking to make this better.

2/5 or 2/10? Either way.. %uD83D%uDE02 Thanks for the advice. I actually based this on two characters (from Gundam Wing). I was going to post this on watt pad or ...

Thank you so much! ^^ I'm glad you gave me some advice. I got the feeling that I shouldn't have Anthony refer to himself as "toned," but I wasn't sure ...