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Cassandra: Thanks for reading! I'm happy about it being clear. Usually, I make no sense to other people. WriterUnderWaterfalls: I'm relieved that you can relate to it as well. This ...

Ha, ha. Thanks for correcting me, Gryph. Sometimes what I say only makes sense to me. I meant I changed it from speaking to "mother" (as in, "I can still ...

Hey, guys! Thanks so much for reading this, and for your suggestions. I see now how this could be mistaken for a romance instead of a mother-daughter relationship. I switched ...

Callie, that was wonderful. Your talent makes me jealous. -_- As for the poll, I picked other. I definitely agree with what bkwrm said about the beauty of poems. Plus, ...

Wow, Wiggy. Really brilliant. No complaints. This was just... wow. So wonderfully genuine and unique, yet I know exactly what you mean. I don't know. It felt like you were ...

"Procreativeness for a Buck" XD That is the best thing ever. I lol'd.

Adam! Thank you very much for the crit. I need all the help I can get. It's interesting to hear your comments on the mood of it, since I hadn't ...

That was great. And having Pearl and Christian at the end was perfect. And yes, Reyu, Claudio's line is great.

kayles: Thanks very much. I'll try and build the suspense a little more. Also: CELEBRATORY NEW MEMBER HUG! Hehe. Nice to meet you. Little Tin Fish: I did make it ...

Oho! Do I detect an incestual twist? This was okay. Kind of short. I'll be looking forward to more.

I really like this! I agree with Nickelodeon, though, you didn't develope Jason's character as much as you could have. And I also must say, I absolutely loved the ending. ...

Thanks a million, Adam! *runs off to fix*

Bravo, Phorcys! I usually have more bashing to do. However, this was very good. Ah! Salvo! You're one of those people with a big vocabulary, eh?

Crits, crits, crits! You guys make me so happy. Sureal: Yarg, me and adverbs. I need to remember the "strong verbs instead of adverbs" bit. I'll see if I can ...

This is fantasmorphic. I also hope this becomes something to chortle at as the noobs blink and say "huh".