JimmyTheMighty

This is hilarious! It had the potential to be really cheesy (excuse the bad pun) but its actually really funny and well written, its easy to imagine the characters going ...

One of the highlights of this for me is the first line, the first line is very important and I think yours is perfect. It adds drama and makes me ...

This is fascinating, I love how snappy it is, and how effective! I'm sorry I don't have much to add, probably just that starting every sentence with 'is it' gets ...