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You didn't get the magic trick?! Oh noes. I guess the image I tried to get was a guy sitting down, with his hands by his side. Using his right ...

Awesome! Revieeewww! And you're totally right about the slip up between Tessa and Jenna XD As for the dream, I did indeed mention it. You can check for it if ...

Hey peeps, I want to start working on this again and accordingly, I added the next section that I'd written long ago but never posted. As always, all thoughts are ...

Hey there, Hero If you'd read the comments, you'd see I mention this is based off of that song, basically. Also wrote a blog on it, haha. As for the ...

Haha, Thanks Lilymoore. And ah, Elinor -- this is a prologue, not a first chapter. Says so in the title...Anyway, thanks all for the input! Cheers

Huh, funny you should mention Alice in Wonderland - it's thematically related, I guess, in a twisted way but I really hadn't made the connection. Meanwhile, I've had a story ...

So, I initially wasn't sure about the role of the 'dark boy' because his inclusion was completely random. I was thinking of creating many manifestations of the devil in the ...

Hey y'all, Thanks very much for the comments :p. I've temporarily struck the last line, will review it later. Not really sure how or if this will be relevant but ...

Huh. I totally forgot this thing existed...and I don't really remember Black Jade at all, though I remember the series...I think I'll take my own advice and go back and ...

Haha, I don't consider that an argument, I consider it a discussion. ^^ If you raise an issue, I'd like you to see that I am at least considering and ...

Heya, June, Thanks for your comment. I don't really agree with though, haha. First off - this is a piece of mine, right? xD It should just be a given ...

Hey WD, Thanks very much for taking the time to respond. I rather think you've misconstrued what was said, in a negative fashion. There was no ill intent behind the ...

Hey there, GJ, Cheers for commenting. I suppose I put in the explanation of magic because I didn't want - and personally dislike when I read such - too many ...

Well, I went back and separately italicised each sentence. Damn, but I'm pedantic and i hope you all appreciate it, haha. Cheers, Prok

Just quickly, all areas beginning with a date, followed by first person narration, should be in Italics. It appears to be working in the 'preview' section but not on the ...