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Um, okay. NOTE: This is just a short parody thingo that I wrote. No offence was intended. Thanks.

LOL, am I meant to buy that XD? Hmmph, I suppose when I get the money, I'll do that, if only out of curiosity. More likely I'll see if there's ...

That makes sense I suppose, yes, I will change that. The demon did want that, he didnt need a body though, just a soul. And he got that. Lol, thank ...

It's definetly longer, and perhaps more unwgainly then something I'd usually write. But then, I didnt want to leave it unresolved so I continued it. As to your critique--and I ...

Just a short comment: shouldnt it be hung? I'm not really sure though ... that is all, lol.

Are you implying my competition prior to this, was meager or less then stellar? LOL, I dont think so, but I'll agree with you in that I've got more then ...

Snoink, who said he was responsible for taxes, governemnt and the like? As for your comments, what absolute crap. So there were a few, a FEW, grammatical errors. Dialogue has ...

LOL--- thanks a lot, I had been thinking that. But now I'm scared, cos you sound like your being thorough and tearing-apart ish. *cries* lol, seriously though, thanks for the ...

Indeed, well, thanks anyways. I've revised and finished the ending, so yay. Bad news is its even longer then before, lol.

Hahaha, thanks a lot Rieda, tis appreciated. Praise is always good for the ego lol, hoping for more constructive crits but thats fine. I'm sure 'dettie will get to it ...

Umm, okay. I guess thats a compliment and yes, I suppose this is dark fantasy. But, I'm a little confused as to what you meant when you said you think ...

Ohhhhhh, so thats a date! Rather then a random collection of numbers ... lol, I didnt realise-- apologies Snoinkles, for my misunderstanding.

Thanks all, your help is appreciated. Clau, Impy--nice pick ups, I edited slightly to make up for some of those things. Hope its better. DD>>Thanks, lol. All the best to ...

Well thank you, certainly a lot of what you said was valid. I don't really want to go into detail on his appearance or the process of assumption when the ...

I'm thinking of submitting this to a newspaper only as it happens to be the only piece that fits the requirements. But it also happens to be one of weaker ...