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Excellent, thanks a lot. I'm handing it in today. Will keep you posted on the results XD.

OKay, I made some slight edits, notibly to the descriptive part you so detested Tri. Be sure to let me know what you think. It was a spur of the ...

Lovely timing actually--well, not lovely, but close enough lol. And no, the man is not the same in the three pieces lol. But that is a very intriguing thought. Extroadinarily ...

Lol, no worries. Although it was intended for Bubbles' eyes. And she still hasn't seen it, I think. Meh, she'd probably be disappointed anyway XD. Thanks for the comment.

Ah, cheers for the crit 'dettie and thanks for the comment Wiggy. Appreciation all round, lol. I'll get to fixing the third part, it needs work I know, and yeah, ...

Cheers for the comment Tri. Much appreciated; I should have perhaps mentioned that its the third part I most want crits for. The other two are tried and tested--if now ...

Hey, thanks for those. *edits* Tricksy little things arent they. Did you guys notice the links? The mention of the map the Collector used to find Ivan. And the connection ...

I'm sure many of you are aware of these stories already. But they are no longer seperate. For my final, three thousand word piece of my writing course. They are ...

Grading System: Fail Pass (P) Credit (C) Distinction (D) High Distinction (HD) I got a C for this, and that, incase your wondering, is fantastic. Its extroadinarily hard to get ...

Hahaha, noice Loony, very noice. Especially love the use of 'shank', so very apt. Thank you both for your comments.

Lol, the ending was meant to be a surprise, but I never said that all the maps were people. Unique people who could see through the illusion were then killed ...

Yes thats been the consensus really; pragmatism over my artistic reservation lol. Just get out there for now; I'm glad you agree that Monster was better XD, that means something. ...

Those things you questioned aren't mine, Tri, those are the parts the editor added in and for the most part I... dislike, really. And again, as I said initially, I ...

*pokes story back onto first page for Bubbles to see*

But...but...I dont like Tim! Although it might have more impact if the main character died...eh, I did that in A Collector's Art, lol. A friend of mine pointed out that ...