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Thats the kind of comments/positiveness I need! *bottles you up, puts in backpack, takes everywhere* I am trying to make it realistic, to question and to keep the ideas fresh ...

*throws more chapters at you* XD. Heya! I know, I love writing my short stories... but I wanted to prove to myself that I could write a novel length story, ...

I know right. I'm a master of subtlety.

*pokes*

LOL. Hey, Gyr. Quote: sitting abreast the flames This may be another Aussie/Yank thing, but over here “abreast” means “next to” not “on top of.” The word you may be ...

Okay.... *waits* I've briefly stopped writing this - chapter 3 is up and posted of course - but beyond that I haven't done anything. I'm now writing a short story ...

Whoa, yeah, so it would seem. Thank you all for the taking the time to comment and for the helpful comments - when I come back to edit all this, ...

Hey, thanks for the comment. As for Mikhail and killing the Magister -- of course he didn't actually do it, but he's just a kid so he feels responsible. If ...

Whoa! I mean, whoa. For the most part, very helpful suggestions! Thanks a bunch Gyr *hugs*. I am not, I should say straight off, going to make wholesale changes immediately. ...

Its posted, by the by. XD

Oh, I didn't notice all that much tense change, but I will go over it and see what needs to be fixed. Thank you all very much; my audience remains ...

I have to say I'm surprised by how many girls are liking this - I mean, that is to say, so far its seems like an all female audience applauding ...

Ah, thank you both for those comments. I don't know if I should write another installment, but then this one didn't really take too much time or effort so I ...

Okay, first off, thanks to all for commenting. I wrote this last night as I was waiting for a video to upload, in an effort to stave off boredom :p ...

Ahaha, take a bow Panda Dave, that was nicely done. Feels good to have the little things pointed out to me - *pokes lazy YWSers* I think you're both right ...