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You're welcome, lol. You're right, he could've gone insane but it seemed fairly straightforward -- 'we have a human being!' -- 'sharp teeth, claws and a word that sounded like ...

Yay, Jab-Jab, heretofore known as the amazing Eater of Comma's! XD This is nowhere near finished, lol, though I wish it was so yes, I'm going to continue. All the ...

Haha, yay, comment! *noms teh awesome Junebug* Thank you very much, I'm glad I...er, creeped you out. XD Cheers

Nice, very very nice indeed. Gotta love it when all the little pieces come together XD

Yes, indeed I am done with this story - at least in its present incarnation - and thank you very much. At some stage in the future, I intend to ...

Thanks, Angel! I'm trying to write the second installment and failing miserably, ha. XD. Cheers and thanks for all the comments

Yep, I got the sense of it pretty well. The style of narration didn't change but the ending is better in my opinion. Luck with it. Cheers

It's appreciated nonetheless! Thanks a bunch. Cheers

*boggles* Oh my. XD Thank you very much! I'm glad this is getting a positive reception. I haven't written poetry in at least a year or two so I was ...

Ah, well to my eyes, those questions are mostly dealt with, in the text. Oddly enough, you're not the only one who has said to me that my works are ...

Will wait to the end - I'm thinking its a good move at the moment, but the ending could change things, no? Will get back to you on that.

Hey Kitty! Thanks so much for the comments, I made some light changes to begin with. Tell me what you think, Cheers

Haha -- Hola, Kylan! It was more an experiment than anything else; I was tinkering with the notion of doing something different with an older piece --- the wands and ...

Well, it depends on the tone of the piece. I mentioned the swearing - not only so you would be aware of the realities about programming hours, censoring and ratings ...

Good for a chuckle. :wink: