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I love the "Sundays are pictures". Not very good at critiquing lyrics, but you seem to have a really interesting piece here.

I'm not very musical, but I always imagined some sort of folk/ soft rock sound to the song. Any suggestions? I would greatly appreciate critique!

Suzanne, the most thorough critiques are the best critiques so thank you very much! When someone has a lot of suggestions, I can tell that he or she put some ...

Thank you so much June, bubbles, and Snoink! I really appreciate your comments. It will be difficult to maintain the rhyme scheme while making the poem more concise, but I ...