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Hey, Skins. Figured I'd stop with the wall-stalking and come review. xD The blood pulsated through my head like a uncontrollable waterfall. Not a huge fan of this simile. For ...

Hey, Ally. I'll nitpick first, then get on to the main body of the review. Be warned though, I'm almost definitively anti-prologue. xD I grew up being told that stars ...

My first thought when I read this the other day was, "What, no Charlie? Aw." Then, as Zoey's character came through a little more, I realised that she's so different ...

I enjoyed this book, but I liked Dragon Rider even better (I only saw the movie for Inkheart- is the book better?) So much better! I think the movie dumbs ...

Hey, I'm Jet; I'm going to review this, but first I'm going to space it out a little. As much as I promote not judging a book by its cover, ...

Hey, Skins, here for the second fifth of your request. I'll nitpick as I go through, but hopefully I won't be just pointing out typos this time around. You just ...

I'm not a huge Warriors fan, since I lack the perseverence to get through a series with endless instalments, but as you haven't had any reviews yet, I guess I'll ...

Hi Skins, here as requested. Seems like you've had a lot of content-based reviews, which is great, because that leaves me to nitpick what little there is I would consider ...

Hey! Welcome to YWS, WhyteRose. I like the attached cover art at the bottom of the piece, by the way. Anyway, this will just be a general review, because Inbetweener ...

Hey, megsug, this is Jet dropping in for a review. I'm going to nitpick first, as this is very short, and I'm not sure there's much more to comment on ...

Hey, Tori. Before I start reviewing, I want to suggest that you space your writing out. It's much easier to read and more attractive to reviewers. Anyway, that aside, I'll ...

Hey, Jet here. I was going to split this in two and do a full review, but as you said you were thinking about narrative style, I'll start with that ...

If you're going to continue with this, I would spend the first chapter at least introducing these ideas into the text rather than using a preface. It's a useful summary ...

Hey, jemalew, and welcome to YWS! Two tips for posting work: the more you review, the more likely you are to get reviewed; and sometimes, with a long piece, it ...

Hi! Jet here for a quick review. Please excuse any errors, 'cause I'm out of practice at reviewing, but this caught my eye as I'm pretty interested in this period. ...