Jetpack

Hey there, Summer! You know me from Secret Identity, so I'll get on with the review. I'm not a huge fan of romance, but your piece caught my eye, so ...

Hey, Jetpack here, but I go by Jet. Welcome to YWS! I see you've posted in Welcome already, so I'll let the greeters do their job and give you a ...

Welcome to the wonderful world of YWS, new person. Head over to the Welcome forum - found by hovering over the Community tab and clicking "Welcome Area" - to get ...

Hi, it's Jet here. First review! Usually, with a piece this short, I'd nitpick, but I think you'd benefit more if I went over a few general points with you. ...

Okay, I'm here as you asked. I could nitpick this, but there's little point, considering you just repeat the same mistakes over and over again throughout. This is a more ...

Hey, Jet here. You're pretty new, right? Don't think I've seen you around much, so welcome to YWS, even though you've been here a while. I figure I'll give you ...

Z for Zachariah, Robert C. O'Brien. I think that's the right author, but it was just awful... I barely remember why, but it was something to do with the MC ...

Hey there, I'm Jet. Don't believe we've "met", as such. I'm not a big fan of the emotes before the piece; doesn't really endear you to some serious reviewers, but ...

Here as requested! Sorry I took so long. I'm not really a multi-chapter person, but I'll give you a quick one here. Nitpicks first. I sighed, forewarning the follower that ...

Oooh, I saw your username and thought I knew you from somewhere! I remember reading this one. I've had a look back at the older edit and I can see ...

Hello, here as requested. You say your piece has been getting little attention; one of the reasons is length. We all vary in our reviewing ability on YWS, but even ...

Hey, as requested, here's a review. I already did part of it before my computer died, so I'm having to redo the first couple of points. My patience may be ...

Aww. ^_^ Not quite sure how this would work in realistic terms, but that's never bothered me much when it comes to stories. I'll concern myself first of all with ...

'ello. Welcome to YWS, new person who's read the rules and actually done 2 reviews! I like you already. :) I usually do nitpicks, but I think this would benefit ...

Hi. I didn't read the original, but maybe that'll help you out, an objective opinion and all. I'll answer your designated questions at the end, but I always do nitpicks ...