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  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: A Criminal's Heart-Prologue (REVISED)

    This is really good. From the very beginning you capture the audience's attention, by starting at the climax. Just a little thing. At the end when the main character gets ...

    Mar 22, 2010


We think in generalities, but we live in details.
— Alfred North Whitehead