Jesse

I'm a big fan of this poem. The repetition only made it stronger for me. I especially liked your lines, "With all its simplicity" "With all its complexity" This is ...

I really like the way the book is turning out .. keep writing!

I didn't find a thing that I could say to help make this better. I would rather read this than the book im reading now. Wow. Your good

Hey i really liked this. My only advice to make it more professional would be to drop the last stanza. But I bet those lines have lots of meaning to ...

haha beautiful description of what seems to be an everyday occurrence

Simply Epic. But i dont recall hearing about an event such as this

just backstabbed me and rocked my world, or what was left of it The next day at school; I did my best to look happy but not everything they did ...