Jessa

Yes I have read those books! They are amazing! I love to read, although now that I have started writing more I find it challenging to read books because I ...

Thanks guys! I'm glad you liked it :) And I changed that line, thanks for the edit! -Jessa

Heyy Kay! I like how this turned out! I know you worked on it a lot and I think your hard work payed off! I especially love the ending of ...

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. Those four lines were the most difficult ones to write, but they are my favorite too! -Jessa

Hey Everyone! Thank you for taking your time to review my poem! I am glad you liked it. As for the ABAB vs. ABCB I did this on purpose, but ...

JoJo, Termination is what inspired this poem. We were talking about it in my religion class on friday and it made me very angry. I figured it would be a ...

First of all I'd like to thank all of you for the comments, they are very useful! I will be working on edits for this poem (if it is even ...

WritersUnleashed and Kafkaescence, Thank you for your edits/opinions. They will help me a lot :) -Jessa

kimalane21 - You hit it exactly correct! I wrote this poem because I'm pretty sure I failed my Pre-Calc test today. I am glad you were able to catch that. ...

Bolshevik - I appreciate the input, but if it was as easy as breaking the glass then there would be no need for the poem :) Inkwell - I am ...

Tommybear - I liked your idea for the last line to be changed and I was actually thinking about adding more to the background behind this poem tomorrow during school ...

Thank you for the review and for welcoming me! Yes, you are correct it was glass that was separating the two characters. The one who is speaking in the story ...