Jenthura

Damn, what a story. I love that it felt very believable, like she was living a cautionary tale. When Secret threw the coin back I thought for sure it would ...

> in saving me, he’s doomed us both. This line hit me pretty hard. You have no idea how close that hits to home for me. Art is supposed to ...

Hey, thanks! I'm rewriting this now.

Oops! >

Much appreciated, friendo.

Thanks. :D

Thank you!

Thanks for the review. I would have done it in more detail but it was an assignment for school that had to be based around memories, so I just did ...

Keep drinking. Keep writing. This was interesting.

Cute.

This doesn't belong in the Short Story category.

This is unreadable. Dialogue needs to start on a new line .

Don't bold the whole thing. There's no point. Learn to capitalise properly. Make it readable by doing a few more grammar and spelling checks . I hope you continue writing. ...

We had met in grade eight. I was in the eighth at the time. He was a grade above me, the new, shy and nerdy boy in grade nine. I ...

Is there somewhere we can listen to the song? :D