Jenthura

Gaia smirked she could use magic too. I wasn't going to do nitpicks, but this sentence popped out at me for its awkwardness. Maybe: Gaia smirked THAT she could use ...

Well I must say that am impressed by your expression of memories (if they are, they certainly ring like such to me) or imagination. I know what it's like to ...

Well, I can say this for sure: You're a budding writer. There were grammar and spelling mistakes all over this piece, but that's okay: get the story idea out of ...

Not having seen the movies myself, I don't know what to expect nor what to criticise on cliched information or plagarism, but I can comment on the writing. While the ...

I, being Thai, can connect with you there on that point. The villagers and farmers here don't have wishing wells (barring the temples and numerous Buddha statues they pray to) ...

That's an awesome speech (you misspelled it) on how we're losing originality. I love how you described it in potatoes and then implied it in a human by that phrase ...

Cool! What book? Anyways, great work, the last stanza was, by far, the best, seeing as how the rest of the poem didn't seem to match up to an meter ...

Obviously I cannot give a full review to these lyrics without the music, but I can try, can't I? Anyways, Bliss is not a normal girl's name, so I'm speculating ...

Indeed! I find it quite helpful to write everyday (barring the days when I cannot, just like you). In replacement of stick people I draw maps and building designs, creating ...

I've re-red it, and I think writing the beginning that way confuses the reader (don't be discouraged, it was a good way to begin a story, just not this one) ...

Hmmm, very unique and strange; random and weird, but good nonetheless. It could use a bit of editing... It was a chilly, quiet evening in the highway to Ramgarh, a ...

Hi there! I will (try to) be your reviewer today! My corrections in CAPS. ...and the sidewalk entirely different concrete AN entirely different concrete? That would make it less awkward. ...

The prologue to your novel was drawing, cliffhanging and short, perfect for a prologue. But this first chapter should be a bit longer (even though the help sectors tell you ...

I would review if I could, but many others have beaten me to the pessimistic, nit-pickety, perfectionist type reviewing I try to do,s o I can only say how much ...