JennyImStory

This was VERY entertaining, I truly had fun reading this. You had nice humor and great magic. A+++ in my book! Sarcasm is the best and it was beautifully done ...

This was such a good chapter! Now we know that Grace is planning something and that Canara and Ana will play a role. She's already become the leader of the ...

Everything has definitely gotten more intense with this huge storm and all that. It seems our main protagonists are very brave individuals, but some stuff is still confusing. Such as ...

This was a good chapter, it sets up another story line and shows more about the character Grace. I have only one problem with it, if this is the end ...

*Panting heavily* I-I've done it! I read all five chapters! I still can't believe you posted FIVE chapters at once! This chapter was so cute! But it was really short, ...

I love how in the beginning you casually say "James had begun courting me at winter holiday" like it's nothing. Meanwhile I'm here like: WAIT WHAT?!?!?!?!? I wanna see the ...

She's going to meet princess Grace? Where on earth could that lead? No government revolt or society crumbling? Nahhhh. That would never happen. I'm so excited to see what will ...

So it would seem our little genius can shoot people, cook, and knows her poetry. Triple threat if I ever saw one. Her going to school opens up so many ...

As always, Ana is just great. She's considerate yet against the status quo! I like how she's fascinated with the post-war world, her curiosity is a great way to remind ...

This was a good chapter, as always Ana is a very compelling character. She's smart and good natured and I just want to see her win at everything! Also James ...

Ooooooooooooooooooohh! She's leaving? (hehehehe.) This is so good! I wonder where she's going?? Alright, silliness aside, this was a good chapter. You conveyed Canara's emotions SO WELL and it didn't ...

This was a cute little skit and a nice way to introduce your characters the dialogue was pretty natural and the tone was laid back over all, no impending doom ...

This is a nice story, you've got some depth to your characters and it has a very casual pacing to it. I enjoyed it quite a bit and the cliff ...

So WOW. There's a magical underground city, that's quite something. I thought this was another cool chapter, as soon as I think I know what the genera is you go ...

BRUH! This chapter name . . . MISLEADING!! Alright, not for the actual review. I liked this chapter a ton! These kids have common sense! A thing that doesn't show ...