JennTay

thank you:)

Ignore the "Change" in the beggininng of the first sentence. that's not suppose to be there.

This poem is beautiful. It makes me think of those old songs like "Oh My Darling Clementine" "My Bonnie Lies Over The Ocean." It was a very satisfying read and ...

This is a powerful poem. its a smooth read and i didnt have to reread over anything to understand what you were saying. I like how you turn "hollow" into ...

haha the irony:) Thats ok, im kinda in the same position right now too:)

Thank you Omi:)

thank you so much, this has been very very helpful. i will be sure to work on those weak spots ;)

Awesome! will do:)

Thanks so much for the advise, I appreciate it:) yeah I know its short, it is actually a piece of a chapter, I guess I should have posted more:)

to be honest, when i read this i was a bit disapointed. I would have never been able to get that this poem was a metaphor for the strikes in ...

This poem is very well written! i can picture everything going on in my mind. When i read this, i felt i became the narrator. And i really like the ...