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  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Mind and matter

    Thank you. The second to last line is basically about how we are focus on how our relationships look and how we only tend to choose "the one" based on ...

    Jun 25, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense Re: She's Brilliant

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    I enjoyed the mystery of who the writer is directing the poems towards and how all in unveiled in the last sentence. Great use of simile's.

    Jun 25, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense Re: She's Brilliant

    I enjoyed the mystery of who the writer is directing the poems towards and how all in unveiled in the last sentence. Great use of simile's.

    Jun 25, 2015


When I was young, I admired clever people. Now that I am old, I admire kind people.
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