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  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Mind and matter

    Thank you. The second to last line is basically about how we are focus on how our relationships look and how we only tend to choose "the one" based on ...

    Jun 25, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense Re: She's Brilliant

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    I enjoyed the mystery of who the writer is directing the poems towards and how all in unveiled in the last sentence. Great use of simile's.

    Jun 25, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense Re: She's Brilliant

    I enjoyed the mystery of who the writer is directing the poems towards and how all in unveiled in the last sentence. Great use of simile's.

    Jun 25, 2015


The wince that you wince when you see your quote in the quote generator is quite a wince, I tell ya. To know that the whole YWS community has read and judged your quote is quite an awkward feeling like oh noes. *manly blush*
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