Jay

Very poetic and captivating. It took me a while to figure out what it was about but I think it's reflecting on the journey of life, looking backwards as well ...

I really liked this, which for me is rare with an emotional love poem. It had me rooting for the narrator and I really enjoyed the conflicting feelings. I would ...

I loved this poem-it was very creative and clever with lots of imagery. The last line should be: "they who will find the one who deserves their heart is the ...

It seemed kind of limp and droopy to me-the narrator, that is. They sound pathetic and needy, to be honest. I would also suggest making the lines longer-it would work ...

I liked this essay and I agree with your point too! People seem to think sarcasm is inherently bad. It's true, people can be sarcastic and hurtful, but not all ...

Very poetic and well-written poem. In the first line it should be 'livelihood' where it seys 'lively hood'. Also, this bit "The feet cringed as the weight of the dancers ...

I prefer this version to the original. The only problems I have is the title "Stairway to Heaven" seems overdone, and I wasn't expecting the narrator to be named Skip. ...

It took me a while to figure out what the poem was saying but once I got it I thought it was a great idea expressed in a creative way. ...

Well, at least those elves will get proven wrong... Oh, by the way the phrase "Galbatorix kicked Vrael in the fork of his legs" never fails to crack me up. ...

You've got an original and entertaining idea. I think it's quite catchy. The writing style is effective-easy to relate to for the concept and it doesn't fall into the wannabe-archaic ...

It's probably one of my favourite pieces I've read here, because it doesn't try too hard or put on airs and graces. Not everything has to be serious and deep, ...

I enjoyed it, even though I don't count myself as a Harry Potter fan. It seemed very introspective, like an exploration of Harry's feelings. I liked that element, but I'd ...

I like this update! I find it really interesting how Noel is leading a double life. I wonder if Dala and Theol really are only in her imagination, and they ...

I really like this story so far. I'm not usually a fan of a lot of romance/drama, but that's just a matter of taste. I loved the school song-very funny! ...

A good start that hits all the right notes-there's just enough information revealed to make it interesting and spooky, but the plot isn't given away just yet. It ends on ...