Jassie

Awwwwww, what a cute poem! It's like one of those short poems I'd print out and hang in my locker lol Keep up the good work! =)

I love funny books, although this one sounds a little dark and out of the ordinary, I might just go get it from the library sometime! :D

Your rhyming was really nice, and it made me happy, until the stanza with the "own.../...throne." The words just sounded forced into the stanza. The own/throne thing I can explain ...

Thanks for the advice. I've never actually read poems about homes being prisons so I didn't know anything about "originality" This poem I honestly wrote in 5 minutes after reading ...