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Jasperbiscuitt

  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, Other Re: Swings

    I appreciate it! Right on

    Feb 11, 2023
  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, Other Re: Swings

    No stanzas, sorry folks!

    Feb 1, 2023
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Lock and Key

    Mar 30, 2022
  • Poetry » Health, Realistic Re: Hunger

    Thank you so much!!!

    Oct 7, 2021
  • Poetry » Health, Realistic Re: Hunger

    Thank you so so much!! I actually had stanzas but when I pasted it, it lost them :/

    Oct 6, 2021
  • Poetry » Health, Realistic Re: Hunger

    Thank you so much!! You're very sweet.

    Oct 5, 2021
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: im gonna miss you (and jackson ohio)

    Wow!! I'm very impressed, besides the capitalization, I only have on critique. The use of the words "cause" and "til" show casualness, but the punctuation shows otherwise. You could change ...

    Oct 5, 2021
  • Poetry » Health, Realistic Re: Hunger

    Thank you so so much!!

    Oct 5, 2021


Never express yourself more clearly than you are able to think.
— Niels Bohr