hi i im here to give you a review on what i had read on your work
lets get started!!
First off this was actually pretty good on what i read this good incredible poem i was like i really this nice poem and i love the way you had it edit like that was amazing the way you had it edit but it was wonderful that you had made a nice cool vibe poem but you actually did well with this one
my compliment is this was just a little short poem cause you barely didn't put that much on your poem but only 1 but i guess this is your poem but i know that i was just saying but this was so short
how you can improve is just write like 4 least that goes your poem and do the edit just like you have it now and next time just know that your poem can be at least 4 to that poem
keep writing have a good day!!
~jay~
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