Jashael

LOL...thanks for the reviews anyway. :D

Wow! You totally have me hooked in your story. I'm not really a critic, but more of a reader, and I must say; your story is really cool! It took ...

Hey guys! Let's put this back on track. Keep comments about the reviews of the poem only! No commenting on comments. Veiyloxx! If you do not want to get anymore ...

Hi, Nice poem. Just spotted one little thing: 'Coz Even if I diligently try I think 'Coz should be 'Cause. Because it just makes more sense. ;) Oh and I'm ...

Listen yall... "your" is slang not that, that matters because it doesn't. Poetry is the only exception to literary work that punctuation doesn't have to be applied. So for those ...

Hello there... :) This is a sweet poem. I can totally relate to it first of all. The flow is great, the rhyming, where it's supposed to rhyme is not ...

I think that it was okay. It wasn't the best story I've read but it was good nonetheless. hello, charlottegrace! I really wish you could've said more so I could've ...

Hi Jash! I'm SporkPunk, and I'll review this today. Now, this piece is rather lengthy, so rather than going through and picking out everything I can find, I'll give you ...

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The imagery is very good. It's a nice poem, talking bout an average day, eh? :) good job

Overall I thought it was pretty good. I've never heard a song about Emily Dickinson before. :) I didn't understand everything you said but that could be because I'm not ...

Hello there. I shall be reviewing you today. (: I'd like to start off with that there's nothing enormous that jumped out at me technically speaking. The choice of vocabulary ...

Just a short story I wrote when I was in ninth grade... Hehe... My one and only short story though. I had a hard time doing this, why? 'Coz my ...