Jashael

Hello Jash! I'm here on a mission! that is to review this story :D First of all, I got to agree with Yuri and Skins :D But your chapter was ...

Despite any resolutions Morgan had made earlier, she ended up sitting at the dining table half an hour later, a bowl of tomato soup before her. Her insistence that she ...

“Morgan!” “I am not coming down, if that’s what you want.” “Morgan, show yourself this instant.” “No.” “You will do as you are told, young lady, and nothing besides.” “Well, ...

Hey, guys! Thanks so much for the reviews! XD

Thanks to whoever else who liked this. :)

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I just have one thing to say: this is brilliant. It's beautiful, emotive and emotional. Definitely simple, but love can be simple, and simple can be magic. I love it. ...

wow, this was beautiful. Even though the poem was quite short you managed to get your point across to the reader. I Love a poem that has been written about ...

Thank you, guys, for the reviews! =D/

Hey, Libby! I'm so sorry for what happened. This is such a sad poem. *tear* Anyway, the style that you used here is great! :) Keep it up.

Hello, everyone! I had edited it a bit. I don't know if it's better. I've somehow managed the spills. Any suggestions? :)

Great poem. Loved everything about it. some of the rhymes were good. specially the got and lot part. in short, it was awesome. Thank you, NeoAnderson! :D/

firstly i love that you haven’t edited; coz makes enough sense to me ;) this is a beautiful piece of writing even for a sixteen year old let along a ...

Hello, Yuriiko! No prob! :) I was laughing when I saw your post. I mean, man! Most of those errors weren't errors! They were mistakes. :| Anyway, yes. I will ...

Hey, Jash. Since you said in your notes before the poem that you were too lazy to edit again, I didn't see the point in giving you my typically in-depth ...