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I just wanted to add something about the ending: I meant to mean that like, when will the object of the poem take delight/find comfort/learn to listen to the speaker's ...

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Lightsong! This is a helpful review! Plus, I enjoyed reading about your thoughts on each part. I know everyone has his or her own interpretation of a poem, but it ...

alliyah! Thanks a lot for dropping by! I'm happy to hear that you've enjoyed my little poem. Yes, I'm trying to befriend brevity and glad to hear it's working out ...

Ahahaha! Okay, crazy. People either love or hate that line and (so I assume it must be good :P Kidd'). I was only trying to play and add meaning to ...

D'awwww! Hey, Justlittleoleme2! thanks so much for the review. I'm now trying to rework the poem, especially the last line. ^_^

Hey! :D Thanks so much for this review! I like your interpretation of it as it might just be what I was trying to tell.

LUMI. HI, HOW ARE YOU. This is definitely a very helpful review! I'm trying to rework the poem now. :)

Enjoyed reading this! Actually tried to rap it. Lol. VIDEO VIDEO!

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The plot for this story is originally for a novel, so I think I'd be able to flesh out a bit for Rhema's intentions. This review is AMAZING! Thanks so ...

Enjoyed this much.

Oh! Okay! I'll do that now. Thanks : )

Ooooh! Thanks a bunch for the review! =D

Thank you very much! :]