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Re: One Country, Two Worlds [Part 1]
Hey, girl. I'm sorry if I'm so slow, but here I am now! :D Just going to tell you that I'm not so good with historical fiction; but I'll try ...
Feb 3, 2011 -
Re: The Power of Pop Secret
I've been gone for too long. I apologize. But here I am! NITPICKS | ADDED | CHANGED | PAY ATTENTION In fact, we considered each other our sister and brother, ...
Feb 3, 2011 -
Re: Short Popcorn Chapter
Hey there, Book. As I've said in my WRFF thread, I'll only review nonfiction if it's Biblical; so here I am, reviewing something from you -- fiction. :) Here it ...
Feb 3, 2011 -
Re: .
1. Yes, I know I don't have to. 2. Really? So you'd like me? :D 3. I have no idea. I saw you at my feed? LOL I should stop ...
Feb 3, 2011 -
Re: Mirror World (Contest Entry)
Hey, Tiggie. As you warned, I'm not gonna read this. LOL But I read the first and last parts, and I have to say: girls were using gays for the ...
Feb 3, 2011 -
Re: Escaping from Hell
Hey Vamp. Here as promised. :) Nitpick #1 No, I don’t remember what it was about - -probably some situation she was facing at home or how she came to ...
Feb 2, 2011 -
Re: How sad is the peacock!
And you got my 200th review! LOL Hi, Skorp. Can I call you Skorp? LOL. Okay, I'm here as promised. :) I don't feel like nitpicking. Well duh, there's nothing ...
Feb 2, 2011 -
Re: Pieces of Time (Titles Contest Entry)
Hi MEg! As promised, I'm here. :)) NITPICKS | ADDED | PAY ATTENTION | CHANGED Nitpick #1 The few coins she had left lay in her palm and seemed like ...
Feb 2, 2011 -
Re: The Wisdom of Mr Fox
While making people in my WRFF thread, I'm here reviewing my friends' works. LOL I'm mean...haha. Anyway, here it goes. I've never read a poem by you before, and you ...
Feb 2, 2011 -
Re: Third Avenue
As promised, I'm gonna give you a review. :) Okay, I really don't feel like nitpicking. Your style is great really, Tiggie. O_o I like the way you use run-on ...
Feb 2, 2011 -
Re: Love Will Find You
Ahh... it's good to be reviewing again. :) Sarreh if this took so long. First is poem structure: My suggestions will be in pink. Where craggy Africa,
Feb 1, 2011 -
Re: Poem
Hi, Loller! Thanks for the request. This is a nice poem written in an informal voice. Though I must admit that I didn't get the theme. *sighs* Can you feed ...
Jan 17, 2011 -
Re: Three Stupid Choices (Chapter Two)
Hey there, LD! I'm sorry if this is quite late. :) Anyway, I'm here now. I can see I'm the first one to review! Oh, before I start, you probably ...
Jan 17, 2011 -
Re: Wishes Enveloped In Paper Aeroplanes
Hey, Girl. I'm here as requested. But I might just finish the first half today... it's too long. :p But I'll try my best. :) NITPICKS | CHANGED | ADDED ...
Jan 14, 2011 -
Re: You could have (edited)
Hello there, dear. Kuya is back. :) (I know you can understand that. :lol:) I haven't been on for awhile. Did anyone notice? Bet not. HAHAHA...anyway, I'm now here to ...
Jan 13, 2011
