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Re: Da Vinci, Da Bum
Lone, rusty light bulb- illumine my thought. Flick'ring periodically, shining through the clutter. Canvas in corner, half-finished portrait of which I can't even Remember – the subject. Some scripts
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Re: The Cobra-Chapter One
Isha, this is actually good! I do have ONE suggestion. Please describe the setting. You know...uh, did I miss it? I couldn't picture if the story took place in a ...
Sep 17, 2010 -
Re: Tonight
Tonight INTRO Shut out Locked in You’re looking up But they push you down Helpless Powerless You try and try But you lose control VERSE As their choke hold fails ...
Sep 17, 2010 -
Re: Today.
Ahhh! I can't remember when this was written, but I'm sure it was awhile back. I do enjoy that I actually wrote something pretty good in the past. Before you ...
Sep 17, 2010 -
Re: The New Begining
I was always the smart one. The pretty one. The good one. Now, I'm the bad one. The blind one. The foolish one. I don't know if that's a good ...
Sep 17, 2010 -
Re: The Old Tree
First post :) Not really a poem person writing stories are more my type, but i wrote this memory poem and figured i post it. --------------- Soon after familiar tires ...
Sep 17, 2010
