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  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Soul Mates

    Soul Mates “Yep , he brought (Bought?) me a ring yesterday.” I smiled at my friend, as she held out her hand and the fake ring shined against the sun. ...

    Nov 2, 2008
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: The Vampires War

    I just added a few grammar corrections. Chapter one: A Birthday Disaster "Blow out the candles, Yuki," (space) my mother spoke calm as usual. I sucked in a deep breath ...

    Nov 2, 2008


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