JaneThermopolis

Thanks SO SO SO much for the great reviews!!! I really appreciate them! Thanks, Jane

Oh and thoughts for a good story title would also be appreciated... :elephant:

I would mix things up but I tried to make each line of the poem end in the word 'heat.'

This was awesome! Great job!

What I had in mind is that she doesn't work directly with the CIA, but she helps them out in various instances.

Thanks for the crits!!!! :)

I really liked this poem, fantastic imagery. I also love how you didn't capitalize the beginning of every line (kind of like e.e. cummings) because it gives the poem a ...

Thanks, thehobbitgangster, for pointing that error out because I didn't notice it before. Just fixed it!

Thanks for the crits!! :)

This was really cute! I actually played this to the song and it was 98% accurate!!! Good job and Keep writing! -Jane

I really loved this. I don't think this needs to be critiqued much. :)

Thanks for reviewing!! And yes I'll pm you when I finish writing Part 3!

Thanks for the comments on Chapter 1. I just posted Chapter 2 and it would be so nice if you two could also read that. Thanks again!