Janay82

Oh.My.God. I seriously love this poem. Instead of just skimming the surface like many people do, you really got down the the deep emotions and comparisons. I must say, this ...

I like it! It's simple, yet at the same time it says a lot. It does sound like a romantic song in a way though, like something you'd sing to ...

Hey! :D I very much enjoy your poem! So I don't have any critique to offer to you because I think your piece is lovely the way it is, but ...

I very much like the idea of it, but you are right, there isn't really a rhyme scheme here, so it doesn't flow. However, I bet this would make a ...

I actually liked this piece quite a bit. You did have a lot of capitalization and grammatical errors that you can hopefully fix though. And also, to me it didn't ...

I very much like the meaning of the poem and feel the same way. However, I don't think it flows that well. You definitely have pottential here and I can ...

Wow I really liked this! They are definitely some interesting things to ponder. I do, however, think it is a bit long. It is repetative throughout the whole poem. Not ...

I think this is quite well written. I have one thing that I didn't think made much sense though. When you said "I hold you so tight, on this cold ...

I think this is pretty good. I don't think it would make a good 'just song' cause of the back and forth conversation, but since it's for a book, I ...

Wow wow wow! I love this song. I find the lyrics to be quite well written and i especially love the similies in the beginning. I myself find that I ...

I LOVED it!!! I think it's possibly even better than Twilight(which in my opinion was phenominal). I am really upset though that the 3rd book doesn't come out for a ...

I don't like alien/space books that much but I read that book last year and it's one of my favorite books of all time. It was well developed and very ...

I honestly can't remember the name of it. I was looking for a book to read in 6th grade and i found this one book that looked good cause someone ...

I acutally think it doesn't sound too try-hard it's not all that bad of a song. I wish i could know what is sounds like though. But one thing I ...

I was a bit skeptical of this peice at first, but as i read on i grew more attached to it. You did a good job writing from a girl's ...