Jamie_rocks

OK, thanks. I'm almost done with the next chapter.

OK, thanks. I've almost finished chapter two. I have a few stories going so it's taking longer than I thought.

OK, yeah, thanks. I was thinking about that. I"ll do that when I rewrite. Thanks again!

Ok, thanks. And thanks about the Halloween thing. I"ll have to look into that to make sure my story doesn't sound like someone else's idea.

OK, thanks everyone. The critique means so much. I'm working on part two now. And gryffgotgame: Thanks, and you're Lone Teen story is really good, too.

OK thanks. I was planning on making it longer though, I guess I should have specified that.

OK, thanks.I'll do that when I rewrite.

OK thanks, will do.

OK thanks.

Okay, thanks for the critique everyone. I'm working on part 2 now.

Thanks everyone. By the way, I like your picture Ali.

Thanks everyone, I'll keep this in mind when I rewrite. Ali, I would tell what the note says, but I don't know myself. I'm no good in the romance area, ...

OK, I edited it. Thanks.

I edited that and wrote more, thanks for the critique.

no one else wants to review me? :(