JamieP

This is really good, and i'd love to read more, please continue to write :) Also, check the grammar used, some sentances feel... clunky, but it still reads well!

I liked it, but just as a quick point, i found that the rhyming scheme you used was too excessive. Apart from that, I did enjoy it, good luck in ...

That was amazing... so impressed, makes me ashamed of my poems :P

This is the sort of poetry I try to write... really enjoyed it :)

Thanks :) I was nervous about posting haha, but thank you for reading!