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  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Devil's Design

    LOVED, absolutely LOVED the flow of this poem. You could hear the rhythm of the words, and it was very consistent throughout. I could hear myself just rolling from one ...

    Aug 18, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Lyrical Re: The crystal ball

    Eyes, eyes, eyes, eyes, eyes. Too many eyes, without any other word to describe it. The content was good, I liked the idea. But why not, use other words to ...

    Aug 18, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Colliding Fire With Ice

    Really enjoyed the poem, it started out slow for me but really picked up at the end. The vocabulary in the beginning the poem made me feel as if I ...

    Aug 18, 2014


People say I love you all the time - when they say, ‘take an umbrella, it’s raining,’ or ‘hurry back,’ or even ‘watch out, you’ll break your neck.’ There are hundreds of ways of wording it - you just have to listen for it, my dear.
— John Patrick, The Curious Savage