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Re: The Devil's Design
LOVED, absolutely LOVED the flow of this poem. You could hear the rhythm of the words, and it was very consistent throughout. I could hear myself just rolling from one ...
Aug 18, 2014 -
Re: The crystal ball
Eyes, eyes, eyes, eyes, eyes. Too many eyes, without any other word to describe it. The content was good, I liked the idea. But why not, use other words to ...
Aug 18, 2014 -
Re: Colliding Fire With Ice
Really enjoyed the poem, it started out slow for me but really picked up at the end. The vocabulary in the beginning the poem made me feel as if I ...
Aug 18, 2014
