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Jaein

  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Limerence (Edited)

    Thank you, I really appreciate it! To be honest I wasn't thinking about grammar while I wrote this (or after, as you can see). I'll definitely have a look at ...

    May 10, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: still (s)he lies

    No review, just writing to say how astounding your poem is and I cant wait to read more of your work. I am speechless.

    May 7, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Limerence (Edited)

    Thanks for the formatting advice, I definitely did not know that. Thank you for your review! I just re-read the first lines and I agree the word 'heart' is redundant. ...

    May 7, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Limerence (Edited)

    Thanks for the review. You were very encouraging, and that's definitely useful.

    May 7, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Limerence (Edited)

    Hey, I totally wouldn't mind if you went line by line. Thank you so much for the positive review, I was kinda nervous about putting this up, but decided I ...

    May 7, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Limerence (Edited)

    Thanks for the feedback!

    May 7, 2015


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— The Devil