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Jadefox

  • Short Story » Literature, Other Re: Tucked Behind the Ear

    Thank you!

    Dec 11, 2014
  • Short Story » Literature, Other Re: Tucked Behind the Ear

    Thank you for your feedback :)

    Dec 10, 2014
  • Short Story » Literature, Other Re: Tucked Behind the Ear

    Thanks! Which one?

    Dec 10, 2014
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Dramatic Re: Where is God When I Need Him?

    Right there beside you. 2 Timothy 4:22 (Paul writing his final words of guidance to Timothy about the struggles he had overcome with strength from God.) "But the Lord stood ...

    Dec 9, 2014
  • Short Story » Literature, Other Re: Tucked Behind the Ear

    Thank you for your feedback. I will certainly take this to heart for dialogue in my future projects. I must ask, though, if you were referring to the "Hey. Hey, ...

    Dec 9, 2014
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Health Re: Voices

    Thank you for the review! To tell the truth, when I write creatively for English class, I always finding myself ending stories differently then I would have if I wrote ...

    May 18, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Where I am From

    Thanks for the review! I'll clarify a few meanings if you like. "Second star to the right/and straight on 'till morning." This is an allusion to Peter Pan, which is ...

    Sep 29, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Where I am From

    Thank you! Actually Julia Rene is my best friend and there's a story behind the "polar bears." I didn't want to add that part, but my English teacher required that ...

    Sep 29, 2013
  • Short Story » Narrative, Dramatic Re: Dogs on a high hill

    You are very welcome! Just let me know if you want me to take a look at anything anytime. :) -Jade

    Aug 31, 2013
  • Poetry » General, Spiritual Re: Those Left Behind

    It's actually has two meanings. This was originally called "Without Salvation" but I thought that was too preachy. I don't want to post the meanings so people can interpret it ...

    Aug 20, 2013
  • Poetry » General, Spiritual Re: Those Left Behind

    You're welcome haha. I can't format the poem how I want by making new stanzas. It's not letting me...

    Aug 19, 2013
  • Poetry » General, Spiritual Re: Those Left Behind

    Thank you. The formatting is messed up. It was originally in stanzas and it was all in the same text but something went amiss. I'm going to try to fix ...

    Aug 19, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Narrative Re: What They Told Us: Chapter 2

    Thank you so much for the review! If you would like to read chapter one here's the link:

    May 30, 2013
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Perspective

    K- Thanks for your review, it was very down to earth. Something I greatly appreciate because it tends to improve my poetry/writing more. Hope to see you around! -Jade

    Mar 30, 2013
  • Short Story » General, Culture Re: The Lasting Wish

    This story was completely filled with emotion and I truly enjoyed it. I don't have anything really to nitpick on so this will just be a comment. :) I was ...

    Mar 30, 2013


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