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Re: Tucked Behind the Ear
Thank you!
Dec 11, 2014 -
Re: Tucked Behind the Ear
Thank you for your feedback :)
Dec 10, 2014 -
Re: Tucked Behind the Ear
Thanks! Which one?
Dec 10, 2014 -
Re: Where is God When I Need Him?
Right there beside you. 2 Timothy 4:22 (Paul writing his final words of guidance to Timothy about the struggles he had overcome with strength from God.) "But the Lord stood ...
Dec 9, 2014 -
Re: Tucked Behind the Ear
Thank you for your feedback. I will certainly take this to heart for dialogue in my future projects. I must ask, though, if you were referring to the "Hey. Hey, ...
Dec 9, 2014 -
Re: Voices
Thank you for the review! To tell the truth, when I write creatively for English class, I always finding myself ending stories differently then I would have if I wrote ...
May 18, 2014 -
Re: Where I am From
Thanks for the review! I'll clarify a few meanings if you like. "Second star to the right/and straight on 'till morning." This is an allusion to Peter Pan, which is ...
Sep 29, 2013 -
Re: Where I am From
Thank you! Actually Julia Rene is my best friend and there's a story behind the "polar bears." I didn't want to add that part, but my English teacher required that ...
Sep 29, 2013 -
Re: Dogs on a high hill
You are very welcome! Just let me know if you want me to take a look at anything anytime. :) -Jade
Aug 31, 2013 -
Re: Those Left Behind
It's actually has two meanings. This was originally called "Without Salvation" but I thought that was too preachy. I don't want to post the meanings so people can interpret it ...
Aug 20, 2013 -
Re: Those Left Behind
You're welcome haha. I can't format the poem how I want by making new stanzas. It's not letting me...
Aug 19, 2013 -
Re: Those Left Behind
Thank you. The formatting is messed up. It was originally in stanzas and it was all in the same text but something went amiss. I'm going to try to fix ...
Aug 19, 2013 -
Re: What They Told Us: Chapter 2
Thank you so much for the review! If you would like to read chapter one here's the link:
May 30, 2013 -
Re: Perspective
K- Thanks for your review, it was very down to earth. Something I greatly appreciate because it tends to improve my poetry/writing more. Hope to see you around! -Jade
Mar 30, 2013 -
Re: The Lasting Wish
This story was completely filled with emotion and I truly enjoyed it. I don't have anything really to nitpick on so this will just be a comment. :) I was ...
Mar 30, 2013
