Jada3155

Wow I really like this but I read it twice because I had to try to feel how she felt when she did all of these thing i really like ...

I'm not going to nitpick at your work at all because I'm new at writing myself . At the end of your poem i then understood what you where saying ...

I love this part of your poem "But I sit here numb, Tears have dried up, Fears have lost its charm, My heart still mourns over the loss, About the ...

Well I would like to say I really like poem it was like you just wanted to get a point across and my favorite part of your poem was when ...