JackpotJohnson

Hey JJ checking in for a review. I really like this, for many reasons One of the main reasons is the flow. It wasn't choppy or paused. It was relaxing ...

Hello there, I am JackpotJohnson -JJ- I am here to give you your first review! Red=Grammer Mistakes/ Blue=My Ideas I'll stop loving you When diamonds never sparkle And flowers cease ...

Hello, I am JackpotJohnson -JJ- Here for your first review. Red=Grammer Mistakes/ Blue=My Ideas! Lets Begin. Peace, once shattered, seems to have been the shortest fleeting moment of light before ...

Hey there Shamrock, -JJ- here back to review. Red=Grammer mistakes and Blue=Ideas Austin Perkinson & The Great Escape Bold this, and center it out. Table of Contents →Prologue: Bad News ...

*Hello Shamrock, I am JackpotJohnson here to review -JJ-, Red=Grammer Mistakes and Blue=My Ideas Center this out, for formating purposes. Austin Perkinson & The Great Escape Prologue: Bad News Don't ...

Wow, very nicely done. You write so nicely. Its long and descriptive. That's what got me, it was so descriptive. It was almost like I couldn't be lost. Every paragraph ...

Wow, this is great. It immediately grabs the readers attention within the first line. You make it so realistic its almost like I'm standing right next to her, crying with ...

I really liked it...I belive that it captures your attention with in the first line. I love how you kind of make it feel normal and it almost like fades. ...