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Bahahaha excellent! I had a feeling that might be the case. I LOOK FORWARD TO READING IIIIT!!

YAY! Anytime!! :D

I really like that approach. I thinking giving him that kind of sentimental reason to help Ky is really strong for this relationship and Rifkin's character. I would recommend a ...

I think the edit was after I reviewed, but I'm happy to see that Ella is mentioned. It makes me so happy to see she's become a professional horseback rider.

OH no, not at all. That doesn't bother me one bit. xD His reaction is just a very real one. It just made me laugh because he sounded like one ...

I see what you mean, and I honestly did consider his turning down the dance offer as a quip on homosexuality, but I think it was vague enough that I ...

Haha, I was worried! I'm glad, though, and feel free to ping me with more questions or discussion. Perfectly normal for writers to do research for their story! You're absolutely ...

Oh, don't worry! Wisdom is gained with experience. :D //oldfart It kind of depends on the direction this novel is gonna take as this could be the lesson the reader ...

YAY! Sounds like a lot will be answered in the next segment, so I'm super stoked to read it. No rush, though, if it means a better quality piece! :D ...

Oh, no worries! You don't need to reply if there's no need! :D LOL omg Cassius' logic makes sense to me and I love it. It is SO Cassius. IT ...

No problem! Bug away! :D Generally, the pacing goes a bit quick, but I feel like it wasn't too glaring here! There was a lot of new information to take ...

Harsh is fine! As long as it makes sense leading up to the Big Reveal. :D And I kinda like the idea of Julia gaining a mother while Ella loses ...

omg that's so tragic! And I freaking love how this storyline was hidden beneath all the happenings, progressing behind the scenes without us really knowing at all. You gave us ...

Indeed! I can tell you've done some planning because it's piecing together so well so far! I can't wait for the next chapter. Hopefully it's sooner rather than later. :D

LOL woops! Thanks for clarifying that. I see how I made that mistake while reading, but it makes perfect sense the other way too. Fickle English, I guess!