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Hi there! I thought this was an interesting piece. Usually the whole school loser thing turns me off, but I think your use of the bully made it a little ...

Hahaha, that was adorable. Poor ducky. *snugs it* You'll have to let me know when the rest is up. The main thing that stood out to me is why Mom ...

Hiya, Cpt. Random! (Awesome name, by the way. You wouldn't happen to be related to Cpt. Obvious, would you?) As the others said, I thought this was an interesting perspective ...

Hey, Seana. :) I can see how this was quickly written, but you already mentioned not to nag about spelling/grammar. XD So I'll not touch that! I will point out ...

Hi! I haven't read the Mortal Instruments, but I think I can shed some light for you nonetheless. Basically, I think it's a good start! There are some spots you ...

The group doesn't exist anymore. If you have a YWS fanfiction, feel free to post it in the fanfic forum with "YWS Fanfic" or some such notice in the title ...

Sorry this is a few hours late! I had something come up last night. But I'm here now! :D So there were a few things that rubbed me the wrong ...

Hiya! I'm here, and I totally read part 1 too! ;D First off, the idea of killing people frightens me. o_O I'm not even sure why they do it; I've ...

Galeeerius! I swear I was going to come review this. I just got distracted with other posts and poetry tends to take me an extra day or two to let ...

Hi! Sorry this took a while. I'm not a poet, so it takes me a while to figure out what I like and dislike specifically about the poem in an ...

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Hi! =D So I thought this was a neat, creepy idea. o_O You built up Maureen's character very well without hardly ever having her interact with the MCs. Well done! ...

I'm finally here! Sorry I didn't get to it sooner. So I enjoy reading your fantasies. Not gonna lie. It always has that traditional fantasy feel, and yet you always ...

Hello, Phoenix! So I read this piece, and I thought your idea was really cool. xD Like seriously. I liked how you used the assistant. She played a HUGE role ...

Hello! I haven't read the previous chapters, nor have I read the original chapter three. However, I figure I could give some pointers to help beef this up! :D Mainly ...