JabberHut

I am here once again! Are you sick of me yet? :D I will admit that after this entire time, only now do I picture the Black/White Swans as actual ...

Hello, hello! I enjoyed this as well as the other two. I think it's the whole seven-year-old perspective that's really selling this to me. Typically, we see all these terrible ...

I am back again! This part has made me very happy in a number of ways. Probably because I was waiting for this for a while and was pleased we ...

Hi! I am here to save the kitten from certain death dinner! So you already knew I adore this. And if you didn't already know, now you do! The youthful ...

Hello! I'm here as requested. :D (And attempting to think up something new to say after all the reviews you've gotten already! Though I haven't read all of them either, ...

Hi, Dasia! I'll try to review this chapter by chapter. Grammar check for chapter one will be in the spoiler. It took me a while though, and a lot of ...

Hello, you two! I'm here with mediocre poem skills, but hopefully I'll have at least something helpful to mention. One can always hope anyway! It's unfortunate this isn't finished yet, ...

Hi, guys! I'm here to get whatever feedback I can muster. Basically, I found this adorable. No matter what you do to it, your siblings are going to absolutely love ...

Hello, Dianne! I'm here as promised. :D I love your style in this. It's very smooth and ties everything together so well which works especially well after he kills the ...

SACHI! I loves you! And I also love this story. No lie! I love the simplicity of this. It gives a dreamy effect which is completely appropriate for this piece. ...

Hello! It's been a while since I've touched poetry, but hopefully I'll have some meaningful feedback. My feeble poetic mind actually liked this overall! I think the second part's probably ...

Hello again! As I promised, I'm here with some feedback. =D I think you wanted to spell "psychology"? ;D Took me years before I finally got used to the spelling ...

Eeeee! Script Frenzy is next month! Who's going to try for it? And if you hadn't noticed, NaPoWriMo is the exact same month! It's going to be a crazy April ...

Hi, Meg! I found this very sad. =( Adorably sad when reading the first part. Still sad though! I think you were successful in developing a tone here, so yay! ...

Hi! Told you I'd be here! =D So I read this. And I instantly missed our storybook. xD I may need to re-adopt my character for another story. Anyway! Just ...