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  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Big City Girl prologue

    Hello! I'm here as requested, and seeing as you have a number of awesome reviews already, I'll be giving my own opinion without having read theirs. :D First off, I ...

    Jul 25, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Trouble, My Favorite (Chapter 2: Warehosue)

    Hello again, Jasper! :D So this was a crazy twist I did not see coming. I'm guessing this is a horror story though 'cause she's in a creepy warehouse. o: ...

    Jul 23, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Trouble, My Favorite (Chapter 1: Pain)

    Hi, Jasper! You definitely had me hooked if only because I was very concerned for Rebecca. D: The thought of what she's been doing herself all this time is rather ...

    Jul 23, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Early Bird; Not a freaking Senryu(that's for Karzkin ;)

    Hey, Yeti! Your haiku was cute. xD I liked it! I'm one of those people who tend to wake up earlier than others, so it made me giggle. 'Cause I'm ...

    Jul 23, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: A tale of an automaton

    Hi, Muse! How're things shakin'? I enjoyed your story! It's a very neat idea. I don't read enough sci-fi to ease my hunger for androids, so this was quite enjoyable ...

    Jul 23, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Proxy pt. 1

    Hey, AJT! So I read this (obviously), and I must say: I enjoyed your style. Immensely! The voice was very clear -- I could tell just the kind of person ...

    Jul 22, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Annie. Morning

    Hey, Teddy! So, I knooow it's been more than a week since you posted this. But better do it now while you're thinking about it! We talked about your title ...

    Jul 22, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: us

    Hello! This is a very sweet poem you have. The speaker's tone is very clear! Quite a few poets struggle with holding a good tone, but your poem is simple ...

    Jun 26, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Here There Be Dragons [edit] - 3

    I'm baaaack! For more lovely Jot and Chance 'cause they're so lovely.

    Jun 26, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Here There Be Dragons [edit] - 2

    Back again, my Hawkie friend! Omnomnom. I love this. Your style is so wonderful. Easy to read yet so enrapturing. Both Jot and Chance are very solid characters too. I ...

    Jun 26, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Here There Be Dragons [edit] - 1

    Raaaaaangerrrrrrr! Hi! :D I don't remember the last time I read your work, but this title caught my attention a looong time ago. It pleases me greatly to see you ...

    Jun 26, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Twisted Vines

    Hello! Cool story you've got started! You've got an awesome vocabulary. I'm very impressed with your writing style. It's not repetitious or too simple/fast to read. Very nice there. Some ...

    Jun 26, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: One Must Scream

    Galeeerius! You ask for my divine poetry expertise, and so I give it. With all the me-ness of it. Of course, I must start off by saying how I like ...

    Jun 21, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Flawless

    Hello! Here as promised! I didn't even delay it another day! Woo! This poem was a very cute story. I could tell the speaker was very touched by whomever they're ...

    Jun 10, 2011
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: My Senior Farewell to Fellow Mustangs.

    Hey, Bunty! Senior year, huh? Craziness! I thought this piece was very pleasant. Makes me teary-eyed from when I graduated. :'3 If this is going to be printed though, a ...

    Jun 3, 2011


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