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Re: Little Turtledove (3)
OMG THIS IS A PRELUDE TO EAGLE ROCK, ISN'T IT ?? I've been extremely excited to see Eagle Rock after hearing so much about it, and I had it in ...
Jun 15, 2019 -
Re: Little Turtledove (2)
So weird to just leave your car behind, but it is the 60s sO I'M LETTING THAT SLIDE. Also, I'm imagining the girls are preteen aged? It's kind of hard ...
Jun 15, 2019 -
Re: Little Turtledove (1)
For some reason, I feel inclined to review each segment. Something about a review contest or something ?? I don't know. I. LOVE. YOUR. NARRATION. I might have mentioned this ...
Jun 15, 2019 -
Re: an island story
D'awwww Rikuuuuuu
Jun 14, 2019 -
Re: Before the Dragon - Chapter 31
THIS CHAPTER IS ADORABLE. omG Jerica is just adorable. She is hilarious. and adorable. and I just freaking love this. I really just have zero qualms with this chapter because ...
Jun 14, 2019 -
Re: Before the Dragon - Chapter 30
MAGIIIIIIIIC! I really like that ending actually, how he just suddenly transitions into magic lessons. In fact, this whole chapter seems to be about Aerik proving his support for Jerica ...
Jun 13, 2019 -
Re: Before the Dragon - Chapter 29
The dialogue flowed SO well here, I am in love. Their personalities came out real strong here. This new fatherly Aerik and this emotional Jerica, duking it out in a ...
Jun 12, 2019 -
Re: Before the Dragon - Chapter 28
So Aerik felt a bit weird to me in this chapter. And I think it might be because he's put into this counselor role that I've never seen him in? ...
Jun 11, 2019 -
Re: Before the Dragon - Chapter 27
OKAY. OKAY I LOVE, ONCE AGAIN, WHAT THIS CHAPTER IS DOING. But there's one major concern that I have, and that's how Aerik IMMEDIATELY jumped into blaming Levin. Like, it ...
Jun 10, 2019 -
Re: Before the Dragon - Chapter 26
JUST AS EXCITING AS I EXPECTED! I'm so freaking excited about the swordfight between them. Like... this is such a deja vu except that it's an entirely different scenario.These two ...
Jun 10, 2019 -
Re: Before the Dragon - Chapter 25
This chapter was rather quick, but it did it's job, and I just absolutely LOVE how it ended. I'm still so very confused as to their ages, but Ithink it'll ...
Jun 8, 2019 -
Re: Before the Dragon - Chapter 24
WHERE WAS THIS JERICA BEFORE ?!? She finally stood up to Aerik like that and it was beautiful. I found it hilarious how cocky she was about successfully navigating their ...
Jun 7, 2019 -
Re: Before the Dragon - Chapter 23 (LMS IV)
YAY! Gosh, I don't know if I've mentioned this [enough], but I just love that you referred to her weak stomach again during transportation. It makes me so happy. I ...
Jun 6, 2019 -
Re: Before the Dragon - Chapter 22 (LMS IV)
OKAY. I feel like we were just in this position, contemplating life at the palace and feeling miserable. It was a serious case of deja vu. I like that we're ...
Jun 5, 2019 -
Re: Before the Dragon - Chapter 21 (LMS IV)
How is it bath time already? I feel like we just started this combat training omg. Ooooh, she heals quickly?! Seems pretty simple to show us that trait earlier on. ...
Jun 4, 2019
