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  • Short Story » Dramatic, Historical Fiction Re: Little Turtledove (3)

    OMG THIS IS A PRELUDE TO EAGLE ROCK, ISN'T IT ?? I've been extremely excited to see Eagle Rock after hearing so much about it, and I had it in ...

    Jun 15, 2019
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Historical Fiction Re: Little Turtledove (2)

    So weird to just leave your car behind, but it is the 60s sO I'M LETTING THAT SLIDE. Also, I'm imagining the girls are preteen aged? It's kind of hard ...

    Jun 15, 2019
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Historical Fiction Re: Little Turtledove (1)

    For some reason, I feel inclined to review each segment. Something about a review contest or something ?? I don't know. I. LOVE. YOUR. NARRATION. I might have mentioned this ...

    Jun 15, 2019
  • Poetry » Romantic, Fanfiction Re: an island story

    D'awwww Rikuuuuuu

    Jun 14, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Before the Dragon - Chapter 31

    THIS CHAPTER IS ADORABLE. omG Jerica is just adorable. She is hilarious. and adorable. and I just freaking love this. I really just have zero qualms with this chapter because ...

    Jun 14, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Before the Dragon - Chapter 30

    MAGIIIIIIIIC! I really like that ending actually, how he just suddenly transitions into magic lessons. In fact, this whole chapter seems to be about Aerik proving his support for Jerica ...

    Jun 13, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Action / Adventure Re: Before the Dragon - Chapter 29

    The dialogue flowed SO well here, I am in love. Their personalities came out real strong here. This new fatherly Aerik and this emotional Jerica, duking it out in a ...

    Jun 12, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Before the Dragon - Chapter 28

    So Aerik felt a bit weird to me in this chapter. And I think it might be because he's put into this counselor role that I've never seen him in? ...

    Jun 11, 2019
  • Article / Essay » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Before the Dragon - Chapter 27

    OKAY. OKAY I LOVE, ONCE AGAIN, WHAT THIS CHAPTER IS DOING. But there's one major concern that I have, and that's how Aerik IMMEDIATELY jumped into blaming Levin. Like, it ...

    Jun 10, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Before the Dragon - Chapter 26

    JUST AS EXCITING AS I EXPECTED! I'm so freaking excited about the swordfight between them. Like... this is such a deja vu except that it's an entirely different scenario.These two ...

    Jun 10, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Before the Dragon - Chapter 25

    This chapter was rather quick, but it did it's job, and I just absolutely LOVE how it ended. I'm still so very confused as to their ages, but Ithink it'll ...

    Jun 8, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Before the Dragon - Chapter 24

    WHERE WAS THIS JERICA BEFORE ?!? She finally stood up to Aerik like that and it was beautiful. I found it hilarious how cocky she was about successfully navigating their ...

    Jun 7, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Before the Dragon - Chapter 23 (LMS IV)

    YAY! Gosh, I don't know if I've mentioned this [enough], but I just love that you referred to her weak stomach again during transportation. It makes me so happy. I ...

    Jun 6, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Before the Dragon - Chapter 22 (LMS IV)

    OKAY. I feel like we were just in this position, contemplating life at the palace and feeling miserable. It was a serious case of deja vu. I like that we're ...

    Jun 5, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Before the Dragon - Chapter 21 (LMS IV)

    How is it bath time already? I feel like we just started this combat training omg. Ooooh, she heals quickly?! Seems pretty simple to show us that trait earlier on. ...

    Jun 4, 2019


"The trouble with Borrowing another mind was, you always felt out of place when you got back to your own body, and Granny was the first person ever to read the mind of a building. Now she was feeling big and gritty and full of passages. 'Are you all right?' Granny nodded, and opened her windows. She extended her east and west wings and tried to concentrate on the tiny cup held in her pillars."
— Terry Pratchett, Discworld: Equal Rites