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Finn, in general. This actually confused me so much. XD I'd really just say "she was also worried about Finn" or something. A subtle reminder of the question the narration's ...

I think it only makes sense that after this whole interrogation scene, Carter ends up telling her something . But GOD do I still feel weak after reading that. XD ...

OH. MY. GOD. I was like I'LL DO A REVIEW REAL QUICK and now I'm reeling over the fact that I ended on this kind of note and I DON'T ...

Whisper didn’t respond. Instead, she stared at the ground intently as though it had personally wronged her for a moment. Pronoun slip-up? D: It is taking an awfully long time ...

But it didn’t matter, he was in an unfamiliar room that looked like what Carter imagined a cave looked like. He’d never been underground like this – bar under the ...

The fact that Shiloh used the right pronouns for Whisper is proof enough that this is the real Shiloh. //nods Finn stepped in between them and shoved them both back. ...

HNNNNNNNNNNNG I LOVE HOW YOU STARTED THIS CHAPTER. I totally thought it was Carter at first and then it wasn't and it was sO BEAUTIFULLY DONE. Carter’s was a disaster ...

and Shiloh could easily have been lying somewhere in the depths of this cave, unmoving. HNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNG Not a sick not-good, and not that he didn’t look go

He glanced down at said water. He had to get to Shiloh, to check her over and see what was going on. Maybe shake her a little for all the ...

He barely managed to suppress a cough and only because he was sure it would completely ruin the seriousness of the moment. He really didn’t want to draw all the ...

OMG VASILE WANTS THE RELIC SALDFJA;LSDJFASDR Also Corin, I think you veRY MUCH NEED NEW PRIORITIES IN LIFE. So I find it weird that this whole conversation started with a ...

It seemed Shiloh liked things she could easily hide from Carter. OMG CARTER NO. SHUSH. OMG SOMEONE STOP CARTER HE'S DOUBTING SHILOH HALP He turned to see Finn riding next ...

I really enjoyed the dream segment. It embodied most of Carter's current fears at the moment, which is mainly Shiloh and the Fire Forgers. It's a good sign that Gideon ...

Red streaks of healing tissue had replaced the open wounds from the night before. Zoltar couldn’t believe it. Other than a faint throb along his left wing, he would have ...

LOL I just. Finn calling Gideon's accent romantic, and Gideon's reaction is just. priceless. omg and Carter trying to imagine the mmap of Italy. I swear. XD Okay, I don't ...